Chapter 2 The writing Process: Stage One (Exploring/Experimenting/Gathering Information)
The Writing Process Defined
The
writing process consist of a set of strategies that will help you
proceed from idea or purpose to the final statement of a paragraph or an
essay. As presented here, the different strategies move from:
Stage One: Exploring/Experimenting/Gathering Information
toStage Two: Writing the Controlling idea/Organizing and developing Support
to
Stage Three: Writing/Revising/Editing
Stage Three: Writing/Revising/Editing
The
process of writing is recursive, which means "going back and forth." In
this respect, writing is like reading. Of you do not understand what
you have read, you back up and read it again. After you reread the
entire passage, you may still go back and reread selectively. The same
can be said of your writing. If, for example, you have reached stage Two
and you are working with an outline only to discover that your subject
is too broad, you may want to back up and narrow your topic sentence or
thesis and then adjust your outline. You may even return to an early
cluster of ideas to see how you can use a smaller grouping of them.
Revision, in Stage Three, is usually the most recursive park of all. You
will go over your material again and again until you are satisfied that
you have expressed yourself the best you can.
The Writing Process Worksheet
The
blank Writing Process Worksheet on page 6, with brief directions for
the three stages of the writing process, is designed to be duplicated
and completed with each major writing assignment. It gives you clear,
consistent guidance and provides your instructor with an esay format for
finding a checking information. Customarily this worksheet is stapled
to the front of your rough and final drafts.
The Assignment
Particulars
of the assignment, frequently the most neglected parts of a writing
project, are often the most important. If you do not know, or later
cannot recall, specifically what you are supposed to do satisfactory
work. An otherwise excellent composition on a misunderstood assignment
may get you a failing grade, a sad situation for both you and your
instructor.
As an aid to recalling just what
you should write about, the writing process worksheet provides speace
and guidance for you to note these details: information about the topic,
audience, pattern of writing, length of the paper, whether to include a
rough draft or revised drafts, whether your paper must be typed, and
the date the assignment is due.
At
the time your instructor gives that information, it will probably be
clear; a few days later, it may not. By putting your notes on the
assignment portion of the worksheet, you remind yourself of what you
should do and also indicate to your instructor what you have done.
Your Audience
More
so than most points on the assignment portion of the worksheet, the
matter of audience requires special consideration. At the outset of your
writiing project, you should consider your readers. Their needs,
interests, and abilities should determine the focus of your subject, the
extent of your explanation, your overall style, and your word choice.
We usually make those adjustments automatically when we are speaking; it
is easy to forget to do so when we are writing.
Stage One Strategies
Certain strategies commonly grouped under the heading prewriting
can help you get started and develop your ideas. These
strategies-freewriting, brainstorming, clustering, and gathering
information-are very much a part of writing. The understandable desire
to skip to the finished statment is what causes the most common
student-writer grief: that of not filling the blank sheet or of filling
it but not significantly improving on the blankness. The prewriting
strategies described int his section will help you attack the blank
sheet constructively with imaginative thought, analysis, and
experimentation. They can lead to clear, effective communication.
Freewriting
Freewriting
is an exercise that its originator, Peter Elbow, has called "babbling
in print." When you freewrite, you write without stopping, letting your
ideas tumble forth. You do not concern yourself unduly with the
fundamentals of writing, such as punctuation and spelling. Freewriting
is an adventure into your memory and imagination. It is concerned with
discovery, invention, and exploration. If you are at a loss for words on
your subject, write in a comment such as "I do not know what is coming
next" or "blah, blah, blah," and continure when relevant words come. it
is important to keep writing. Freewriting immediately eliminates the
blank page and tereby helps you break through in that idea kit will
include some you can use. You can then underline or circle those words
and even add notes on the side so that the freewriting continues to grow
even after its initial spontaneous expression.
The
way in which you proceed depends on the type of assignment: working
with a topic of your choice, working from a restricted list of topics,
or working with a prescribed topic.
The topic of your choice
affords you the greatest freedom of exploration. You would probably
select a subject that interests you and freewrite about it, allowing
your mind to wander among its many parts, perhaps mixing facts and
fantasy, direct experience, and hearsay. A freewriting about music might
uncover areas of special interest and knowledge, such as jazz or folk
rock, that you would want to pursue further in freewriting or other
prewriting strategies.
Working from a restricted list
requires a more focused freewriting. With the list, you can experiment
with several topics to discover what is more suitable for you. If, for
example, "career choice," "career preparation," "career guidance," and
"career prospects" are on the restricted list, you would probably select
on and freewrite about it. If it works well for you, you would probably
proceed with the next step of your writing. If you are not satisfied
with what you uncover in freewriting, you would explore another item
from the restricted list.
When working with a prescribed topic,
you focus on a particular topic and try to restrict your freewriting to
its boundaries. If your topic specifies a division of a subject area
such as "political involvement of your generation," then you would tie
those key words to your own information, critical thinking, and
imaginative responses. If the topic asks for, let's say, your reaction
to a specific poem, then that poem would give you the framework for the
free associations with your own experiences, creation, and opinions.
You
should learn to use freewriting because it will often serve you well,
but you need not use it every time you write.. Some very short writing
assignments do not call for freewriting. An in-class assignment may not
allow time for freewriting.
Nevertheless,
freewriting if often a useful strategy in your toolbox of techniques.
It can help you get words on paper, break emotional barriers, generate
topics, develop new insights, and explore ideas.
Freewriting can lead to other stages of prewriting and writing, and it can also provide content as you develop you topic.
Brainstorming
Brainstorming
features important words and phrases that relate in various ways to the
subject area or to the specific topic you are concerned with.
Brainstorming includes two basic forms: (1) asking and answering
questions and (2) listing.
Big Six Questions
One effective way to get started is to ask the big six question about your subject: Who? What? Where? When? Why? How? Then let your mind run fee as you jot down answers in single entries or lists. Some of the big six questions may not fit, and some may be more important than other, depending on the purpose of your writing. For example, if you were writing about the causes of a situation, the Why? question could be more important than others; if you were concerned with how to do something, the How? question would predominate. If you were writing in response to a reading selection, you would confine your thinking to questions appropriately related to the content of that reading selection.
Whatever
your focus for the questions is, the result is likely to be numerous
ideas that will provide information for continued exploration and
development of your topic. Thus your pool of information for writing
widens and deepens.
Listing
Simply making a list of words and phtases related you to your topic is another effective way to brainstorm, especially if you have a defined topic and a storehouse of information. This strategy is favored by many writers.
Clustering
In clustering,
double-bubble your topic--that is, write it down in the middle of the
page and draw a double circle around it--and then responds to the
question "What comes to mind?" Draw a single bubble around other ideas
on spokes radiating from the hub that contains the topic. Any bubble can
lead to another bubble or to numerous bubbles in the same way. This
strategy is sometimes used instead of, or before making an outline to
organize and develop ideas.
Gathering Information
For
reading-related writing--especially the kind that requires a close
examination of the selection--you will gather information by reading
print or electronics sources, such as the Internet; make notes; and
perhaps outline or summarize the text. Of course, you may also want to
make notes for other topics to write about as they occurs to you. This
kind of note taking can be combined with other strategies such as
brainstorming and clustering. It can even take the place of them. It can
also be used in conjunction with strategies such as outlining.
Source:Brandon,
Lee. Brandon, Kelly. Paragraphs and Essays with Integrated Readings,eleventh Edition. Boston, NY: Houghton Mifflin Company, 2011
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