Sunday, March 4, 2012
March 5,2012
Today Dr. Rivera released our test grade and I am kind of shocked. we viewed some sample essay, such as Leah's essay. Leah is an inmate in California. She demonstrated the writing process that includes three writing stages. First, she used free-writing where she wrote without stopping and letting her ideas tumble forward. In brainstorming, Leah used the big six questions to make her essay more complete such as, who, what,where, when, why and when. Secondly, organization is big part of the essay. Her organization of the paragraph is perfect. Her essay is a good sample for all students.
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Leah was able to complete a good amount of free writing. After reading it, it seemed that it was rather easy for her to freely write all the ideas that were in her head. I also saw that the clustering portion of her worksheet was made use of. I enjoyed her essay and was glad to see what an advantage it is when you follow each stage thoroughly.
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