Today I learn how to write a good essay such as, Vera's essay. she use many detail ideas to support her
essay such as, difference kind of animal and they behave. fist of all,
Vera used clustering to make entire essay like a puzzle. the main idea
of the essay extend difference support ideas. also Vera used writing,
revising and editing technique to write her essay, which is good. In
conclude, we can see she done a fantastic job on this essay. Because she
combined the three writing strategies free-writing, brainstorm and
cluster. Her essay is in page 79 and everyone should check it out.
The details in Vera's essay helped me to visualize exactly what she was talking about. I think that it made a huge difference. The words she used to explain her ideas were very descriptive and easy to understand.
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